Great opening and for paint the artwork is much better than most paint artwork I see. Story line was pretty good too. Over all this was some good work, you just need to work on reducing that air noise. I couldn't understand the guy with glasses most of the time. Once you get that worked out you should be good. some recording programs like Audio Editor Gold have effects for reducing it, and there are tricks you can try as well like lining the wall with egg cartons, but I doubt you would need to go that far lol. Great work, I hope to see more of these.